the flow of my signature
bound to you
the smooth curves
the luscious lifts
flying in loops
dashes of circumstances
combined
entwined
to soulfully complement
my name to you
with a bump on the head
laced with rope
you tie me to the floor
through the power of reason
I lay
left stripped
as prey
the hunger
eats at me
gnaws
at my bones
losing will
to desires
Author notes
Resignation
picture promt - combine both
A contest entry
- Word & Picture Prompt by Cannonsfire.
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Comments
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Strong interpretation and I thank you for the entry
C
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Oh. This is a pretty cool poem that you have penned in here.
I liked how you used the focus on signing your name. That was a cool metaphor and I don't think I've seen that one before so it seemed very original to me. I liked how you kind of fell under your own spell by the end. I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself here.
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