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faced up from hell 2

she wonders why the people that do road work want
to kill her on the road all these years ive been
married to her she screams her head off why they
want to kill her ive all these years her mouth and
said the the road people need to stay no the side
of the road are leave and never come back get run
over by cars..




then one day she said it again and a slug hammer went in her face now she is gone for some of the stupid things shes doen 
im geting to old for some other wife but 30 years years i found a other women and she likes me  and we end did up geting married



for severl years i found my old wife in the paper
but i nevert told my wife right now she was my old wife
because of every thing shes going thru right now
she might brakle up with me
and we would never see each other
again for probaly for a will
and im geting way to old now
the end........

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  • lilwayne12
    April 22
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    good


  • dustookie2
    November 10, 2008

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    Brandon this is a little hard for me to read just the colours but i will get there You have a few little errors that I am sure you will see....will IM you with them we all make those lovely typos from time to time. You amaze me at times at the depth of your work and you give a different point of view which makes your reader think. If you would like some help with what I suggested in my IM just let me know. Keep you pen moving.