With such intensity in your eyes
my heart stops and I cannot breathe,
for the love that radiates to me
is all I'll ever need.
I'm spellbound when lips softly meet
and between breaths you whisper words I ache to hear
you are the only one within my frame
filling my universe this is all I'll ever need.
I can close my eyes and feel your presence
as your inner voice speaks out to me
and the stars shine with such brilliance,
I know you are all I'll ever need.
To be without you, life would wither
your loss would bring such pain
I need to tell you you mean so much
that you're all I'll ever need.
My heart and soul are yours forever
of that there is no doubt,
for you're the one who brings such peace
the only one I'll ever need.
Author notes
Your link at youtube...Say you love me, from Pride & Prejudice....http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVEcloLm4I4
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- You Bewitch Me Heart And Soul. by Poetryintheblood.
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Thank you for your most beautifully expressed entry, Josie
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What deep and loving thoughts...you always amaze me my friend...your writing gets better everyday...I guess we all have grown over the years...beautifully done...
Best to you, my friend,
mystic
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So devoted to one person, that must be the finest love. It is so sweet the way you repeat the same thought at the close of each stanza and with such feeling, grand description and melodic flow to the words. Such a tribute to the one you love.
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Absolutely stunning words. These bring a warmth with them, one of knowing that your love has been blessed with your presence as he has with you. A very loving piece full of emotion and showing the need to be held close. I like this immensely, Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Excellent
A great descriptive tribute to that one and only love. Great job in arousing your reader. Don
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Gay
Perhaps you have a hit here. I can hear Sinatra now croning this fine tune. Your talent always seems to be on the increase.
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Touching sensations
Like showers of champagne rain
with passion driving crazy;
the lukewarm lips as
rose petalsburn in fire,
a sweet essence which
roles to disintegrate your
spell with greeding lures.
Excellent heart felt expressions with such tender soft loving words.
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