Upon bosom I rest and lay
Held in such a loving way
Memories linger tenderly,
of lullaby sung so lovingly.
Author notes
10 to 20 words only
Prompt ~ Mother
In a list
A contest entry
- meaning and emotion by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A most lovely lullaby, this so fits the prompt of the contest, This should be a gold winner, you have put so much emotion and feeling into a few words, great poem, blessings with love John
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning John, I always enjoy you thoughtful comments. Thank you for reading. Sending hugs and smiles,. Take care.
Blessings to you too.
Sandy
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Beautiful picture of a mother and her new born. I'm thankful for moms who love their kids, and takes the time to cuddle them. Thanks for sharing Sandy
Have a great day and may your days be filled with love.
Caresses,
Ron
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Hugs and Smiles Ron
I so enjoy reading your comments. Hope you have a beautiful day. Many blessings my sweet friend.
Always A Friend,
Sandy
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Excellent my friend! Lovely are the memories indeed. Beautiful Write!
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Thank You Noah
Your comment was lovely and most appreciated. Thank you for reading. Take care, Sandy
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This is just beautiful... x
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Thank you for the nice comment. Take care. Sandy
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this is so sweet, you captured such a fuzzy feeling with so few words, wow, best of luck in the contest, i loved what you did with the prompt, and you didn't even use the word in the piece, just fab
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for reading and commenting. It is most appreciated. Take care. Sandy
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Beautiful! Simply beautiful my friend!
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Good Morning Rob
What a lovely way to start my week, with a lovely comment from my dear friend. Always brings a smile when you pop in. You take care.
Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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How Lovely
This is short and so sweet. Life so small, trusting loves comfort to be held.
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Hello Dear Friend
Thank you for the lovely comment. Nice to have you pop in and read.. Hugs and Smiles Dan. You take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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awe now this is sweet, a perfect little lullaby that any resting soul would enjoy hearing.
Simple words that portray such a warm vision of love and care.
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Hello Sweet Brother
It is a delight to read your comment. I hope all is well with my favorite brother from across the Big Pond. I send my love and blessings to you and your wonderful family there. Hugs and Smiles will be rolling in on the tide.
You take care.
Always, Sister Sandy
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Beautiful.
Absolutely wonderful. and said in such 4 lines. Great Job! Keep up the Great Work!
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Great Comment
Thank you for reading and commenting. Always nice to hear from you. Take care.
Sandy
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In most all your writes that I have read, you have a wonderful loving heart of a mother. that helps to bring the best out in every one...even me.
Thank you the sweet write/read, reminds me of my little ones.
and you have a wonderful day.
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A Beayutiful Comment
Thank you for this touching and gracious comment. I apreciate your thioughtfulnewss. Being a mom and grandmom are the most important things in my life. They sustained me through much pain and sorrowin my life until I found God 4 years ago. Now He sustains me whenever pain returns. Hugs and smiles to you.Have a beautiful day.
Peace and Grace,
Sandy
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lovely gentle even if typo of plural is in last line
ah yes sometimes I could spell my name lullaby around my daughter, its so synonymous with mothering and much of those feelings' means!
learning is transcribed so quickly for the little ones with tunes, and moods are rerouted with such enthused or soothed reason for calmest yields via them... especially with layers of physicality sharing convincing!
your first stanza evokes recollection of sister saying she would be glad for foster 'mother' because how she held her on her lap so often nicely.
long derives more than from ditty combined to it in kindness,
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Lovely Comment
Hello and thank you for this most thoughtful comment. I apreciate you stopping by and reading. Take care. Sandy
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Excellent
Brings back those special memories. Great job. Don
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Good Morning Don
I hope all has been well with you. So nice to have you stop by. Thank you for the lovely coment. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. Sandy
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Ohhh what a beautiful lullaby! Just amazing, I so enjoyed reading this morning. I love the background too. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs Theresa
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Good Morning Theresa
So nice to hear from you. I hope you have a beautiful week. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs and Smuiles.
Take care.
Blessings To You and Yours,
Sandy
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