1.
As the dawn sun
caresses your back,
I remember my body
lovingly curving into yours,
just hours before.
11.
I feel a sudden inner jolt,
to see your eyes
with a hint of mischief,
like you know my every thought.
111.
Your arms reach out
to my self conscious smile,
enveloping me
in a world of glowing embers.
1V.
Sighing in soft wishes,
you know,
flaming those embers
into fiery passion once more.
V.
Sunlight blesses
our union,
as I melt again.
Author notes
Prompt - - think 'moments' between lovers
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Comments
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WOW!!
This is good... i like the way you hinted it as a memory.... nicely done..
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This holds the softness of lovers, a very tender write, and always a twinkle of mischief that is shared between two also. Beautifully done... each vignette holds it's own special thoughts!
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Gay
I have notice a change in your style. But that just shows your many skills as a writter. Always a pleasure to read.
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