The runway beckons
Encased in amour plaited splendor
duck taped and bound within
A vision in flame satin
Come fuck me pumps encase my feet
Raven Pre-Raphaelitie curls adorn my head
A vision of elegance coats my frame like Teflon
But my damned tail keeps poking out
Author notes
this was fun, need more fun
In a list
A contest entry
- Time for some laughs, Name Prompt. by Rob..
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Your poetry has been standing out to me for some time now, i've has seen more and more of your works around so I decided to come and see your works. Fantasy work is always hard because you have to go from your imagination, when some one reads it they will never see it quite the same even with a picture so its hard to get the feedback you want.
I think this is a very impressive peice. Its humours and funny but short and sweet at the same time. Very good work!
Keep up the work
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oh this was so much fun to write thank you
I have a half started series under my list fantasy writes, have to leave will be in touch
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Lol
Beware of those in false pumps. In NYC one searching for delight must always evaluate by means of hands and feet sizes. lol Well done and witty poet.
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grin
not size 13 my dear, a respectable size 8 shoe
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I love your picture!
The word play in this is quite clever and just downright fun.
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Very well penned for your given prompt 
Best of luck to you in this contest 
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ya made me think of my x ...and his cher hair....trannies have the best shoes *LOL*...you did your drag queen dragon
justice ... prancin
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xx
I did think of him BIT. MY ROOMIES HELPED ME GET READY FOR A GALA LAST MONTH, MY THEY ARE A GIRLS BEST FRIEND
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LOL!
"Come fuck me pumps encase my feet"
So Thats what their called...hahaha
Darn, and here I thought I'd stump ya with that one...hehe
I like it..."duck taped and bound within", hey, Red Green would be proud, shining even...lol
"But my damned tail keeps poking out", I know huh?, I've had that problem at stip joints....hahaha
Good Job!
(oops, forgot the little clappy dudes)
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duck tape and pumps
I had fun with this one, thanks for the chance t have a little fun!!!!
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