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A Catholic vision of heaven

It's kind of like taking
a shit--those moments
before, when you think
you might not make it
and don't.

Or last weekend when
Steve's mother forgot
I had aids--
showed that bitch
a thing or two
about what heaven is
n't.

A contest entry

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  • Demington
    November 24, 2008

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    Not exactly the the sort of imagery I'd imagined when I made the contest.

    But if I wanted anything from my imagination I suppose I would have just read my own work.



    Blessings,

    C