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Saying Goodbye

It's nights like these
That I slide back in time
Thinking of those nights we sat on your couch
Talking for hours about everything and nothing
I smiled at you, you smiled back
I memorized the glint in your green eyes
The one that always left me mesmorized

The close cut of your red hair

The thin script on your arm

SW encircled in a heart

How I always wondered if it was too good to be

Constantly thinking one day you'd leave me

Just like the others before you

I guess in your own way you did

But this time I didn't get to say goodbye

I didn't get to put up a fight

 

The last words we spoke so sweet and tender

I will cherish them forever

I'd give anything to see you for one more day

To tell you goodbye and not to worry

I've got The One

Someone that will be here forever

Someone I love more than I ever thought possible

So baby, I love you and goodbye

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I love you Shawn, I miss you more everyday♥

Well tell me the truth

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  • your poem made me cry...very emotional


  • Godlike Boy
    January 21
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    I love this poem it made me depressed but that means it works.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    January 9

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    I can relate to this soooo much! Bravo...bravo!!! I want more! Gimme more of that sad sap, crying myself to sleep, reminiscing the past, pure and genuine love!!! LOL Nice job girl

    ~Love and Light~
    Raymond


  • Titus gold member
    November 13, 2008
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    well, you have us now, and me, so, keep in touich, yeah, tony.x


  • Painful Memories
    November 9, 2008
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    Its about damn time

    Finally you wrote a piece on it


    • ShmexiSarahPie
      November 9, 2008
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      Yeah well, I miss him. He was a huge part of my life and now he' gone. I could never find words good enough, these aren't but I had to write something. The pain of losing him has been getting to me even more recently.


  • Devilish Temptation
    November 9, 2008

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    This is beautifully written with such tender emotion I enjoyed reading it, I can relate so it touches my heart
    well done on your piece take care

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