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Oh grey sky
with threatning clouds
so far and high
beautiful grey sky
Patched fields
covered in trees
that provide shields
from the rain
See a grain of sand,
heaven in a wild flower
hold infinity in your hand
and eternity in a hour

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry. I love the imagery you have penned in this.
    Gaylene