I thought you were strong
but maybe I was wrong
I loved you so and still do
listen girl, we'll push through
Absence make the heart grow fonder
as I sit here and ponder
thoughts running through my head
while you're laying in someones bed
Now you listen to me,
you might not, but I do see
that you're slowly wasting away
you're messing up every day
Just take this time to rest
don't get sad and depressed
look at it from another view
relax your mind and renew
You know I'm always here
so baby don't you fear
I'm a little angel on your shoulder
even when things get a bit colder.
A contest entry
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1200 points, ended November 28, 2008, 32 entries
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Just hold on..things will get better.
Comments
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Wow I really enjoyed reading this.. It made me think of someone.
Keep it up.. Uv got some real talent
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great
i like this alot!
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this was a beautiful poem and i love the rhyme. describes a lot of reationships nowadays. thank youfor entering
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aww I love it! I can really feel the words in this poem especially these lines:
Absence make the heart grow fonder
as I sit here and ponder
thoughts running through my head
while you're laying in someones bed
I felt that flowed beautifully and linked the poem together perfectly excellent work, this is lovely.
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loved it
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