Temptress,
she moves all the right places,
exciting the mind and the body.
Awaking primal urges
that till now have laid completely dormant.
Can’t touch her she adds with her heated stare,
so all I can do is caress her with my eyes.
Molding and forming to her shape with a smoothing gaze,
She teases and prepares me, for what she has prepared.
The tip of the whip, traces my chest,
like a snake she soon wraps it around my neck.
Not to tight, my body tenses electric,
the whip is a part of her, and I excite in it’s presents.
Seductress,
on hands and knee
I beg for just a touch of her skin,
tightening the whip and the excitement raises.
If I am a good boy she will give me all of her,
so I a good boy I must be.
I am her pet as she walks me
around the room following her flawless form.
From the velvetiness of her back to
the shapeliness of her taunting ass.
Her fiery hair drapes down, her hip trance me
as the sway this and that way.
I want her bad, and the pressure just raises.
Mistress,
lead to the bed,
she pushes my hands over my head,
cuffing them tightly, she smiles seductions.
Taking her time, she presses her lips to mine,
even that is a tease of what is to come.
I’m a good boy, so I don’t force the kiss,
She open my mouth
and let me taste he sweetness.
A high, a drug as her hand move down my body,
I have to be good, but I can’t take the building.
My manhood raises she gives it a sinful caress,
She moves from my lips and slowly to my chest.
Provoking me, to release into a moan,
she move down below
and her it is all like being reborn.
Goddess,
The wet warm of her lips,
pulls me to the depths of insanity.
No man can take this, no man has every earned it.
She orders me to hold still or she will never let me release,
the licks her tip and works slowly to the base.
Begging eyes look down upon her,
and her omnipotent skills put me to the test.
I hold strong, I must be a good, I must be good.
She vibrates her tongue, and all time just stood.
I hold strong as she release her grip,
she tell me I’ll earn my serenity trip.
All is lost, as she lowers herself onto me,
I feel the heaven deep within her,
just for a second I go just numb.
I feel only her, as we become one.
Author notes
Picture found on found on obessionart.com
I don't know if this is any good, but i gave it a try, it has been a while and i thought about what i wanted to say, this is what i think every woman is, a Temptress, a Seductress, a Mistress, and a Goddess, but that is only if you treat them right. Oh and i didn't finish this for a reason, thought it would be better to let the reads mind wander a bit. I would like to thank Kat, for the chance to get back into practice, and I would like to thank all who read it, keep it flowing
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A contest entry
- Quickie For Men ONLY.. by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended November 16, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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The passion in this is very hot. I love the way your words flow from floor to bed. I love to be told what to do at times in bed. Great work here, thank you for reading another one of my poems. This was very well put together I will say that you have fix some parts of it. In one line I think you meant to say tells and you have tell in the line she tell me I'll earn my serenity trip. In this line, so I a good boy I must be, I think you may have just been moveing to fast that is how the I got in there. I think that was it, I may have saw others but cant recall anyway great work SH
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mmmmmm
this is definately worth that gold!!!!
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that was really well written that could be a pent house letter
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Oh my what a good boy finds for being good! Very sexy write you have here my friend. Very sexy
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damn boy
_________________________________________________________________________________ Once again you have astonished me.....
wonderful job with the wording
you just draw me in to want to read more
each line to the next...
great job!
___________LisaJazmine____________________
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Guess who gave our esteemed friend Kat this image?
LOLOLOLOL
Fantastic write, jawdropping actually
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Sometimes women are blessed and rreally lucky to find a man like you, who understands his goddess.
Damn, this really is wonderful, I'm listing it, and you are an amazing writer..
{I could go on, but this comment already sounde like I have pom-poms in my hands}. . .write write write write.
Dont ever stop writing.
there u go again jin
Much love,
ciao
Jin
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i do like this quite a bit...my boyfriend would like it more but he is not poet thankfully he leaves that to me... this flows really well...i wish i caould be but all that..
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awesome work
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the use of the imagination is sparked when you read this ...great job
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holet crap dude Awesome!
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Hot damn ._.
I love how you painted a picture with your words.
I have no clue why but I liked the line 'If I am a good boy she will give me all of her,
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You have some very good poems
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wowzy.. very very hot write, done with taste and class, just builds the intensity!!
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Wow you have pulled this one off !
Adding all of the Women in such a way as you have
Painting each one is a unique way
Best wishes and good luck in this contest
Julie
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Wow this gives a very strong visual image. You leave nothing out as you describe what you see. This is very alluring and unspeakably erotic. Excellent writing, you have a great talent of paining a picture with your words. Well done this is very well written.
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Very sensually erotic. I love the wording and format of the poem. Got me burning for release. You did an excelent job with imagetry as well, which is important.
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5 stars
I love this I absolutely love this. Sexy a tempting exciting, Such vivid imagery it's just absoluetly beautiful. -
Powerful read. Thanks for sharing it.
best wishes in the contest.
Love
Passions
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A very detailed and slightly intense piece of erotic poetry full of exotic urge. Very Good!
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Wow! Such awesome imagery, very hot under the covers! My screen steamed up! A superbly penned piece, I like how you didn't finish...letting the reader do it is much better 
Good luck in the contest
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this is a fantastic poem.. I love how you did it .. breaking it into like sections. the Temptress etc.. this is a superb poem, the imagery is outstanding. You say its been awhile one would never know that by this .. brilliantly penned. I absolutely love this one a lot. the build up, then the ending, letting the reader's imagination take over.. oh the thoughts that go through my mind on that..
I love the last line of this a lot. this piece is full of sensuality, very hot write. one that I enjoyed reading and I'm sure that others will too.
good luck
kat
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