Cognitively asphyxiated
between the Intellectual and Adonis;
I am leftovers of all that is lavish
Strictly a tangent in afterthought.
Than exorbitant,suddenly!
Crisis strikes and I become
unfailing in every way....
until the panic yields
to erstwhile precedence .
Capable de tout,
long as it is to reprieve those
more meritorious than I;
envisaging me to submit to
every whim.
Dilapidated,
no benevolence thrives here.
Identity evanesces,
as I remain snarled
in your misgivings of me.
A contest entry
- ~Give me your BEST Prewrites~ by Bean Sidhe.
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Well I like this one. Few words I had to look up, but that's only because English isn't my maternal language and how I love to get smarter
The third line of first stanza really struck me... I feel it all too well actually!
Thank you for this entry!
Leander -
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Wow! Thank you,thank you! I've always been quite impressed by your English,actually. This is only the second trophy I have ever won so I appreciate it.
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Oh another reminder of brutal ex and his ways of treating me and those around him. He makes me feel ill.
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Thank you for your entry & good luck!
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