I'll stop loving you when
Diamonds never sparkle
And flowers cease to grow
When thunder doesn't echo
And rivers do not flow
When hearts no longer wonder
And hands are never held
When smiles are only memories
And hope is never felt
When trees no longer blossom
And the stars refuse to shine
When autumn has no falling leaves
And winter never dies
When time has no tomorrows
And rainbows have no hue
When God alone commands me
Then I'll stop loving you
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wow wow wow outstanding and beautiful moving piece
Talented
"When autumn has no falling leaves
And winter never dies
When time has no tomorrows
And rainbows have no hue
When God alone commands me
Then I'll stop loving you "
This is my favourate part of your poem it's spills out emotion and touch's my heart
thank you for sharing and take care
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