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Smile

When I look at you
I smile,

and when I hear your voice
I close my eyes.

You make me mad
because I let you

and you kiss
away the world

with your words.

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  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    December 17, 2008
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    omg.
    i know that sound uber immature, but OH-MY-GOODNESS!!! it's so beautiful( like the one i read a minute ago). and again, i wish i felt this way... sooooo badly! nothing against you or your poetry, but damn, i wish i hadn't read this right now...

    you're gonna be one of my favorites in a minute or two, just watch...

    ~kassie


  • twelveandahalf
    November 9, 2008
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    So romantic. Simple and beautiful, it made me smile. Continue on it Lovely piece