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Never Thought

I thought I felt the love
I thought I felt something real
You told me
The razor blade no longer has to heal

I thought I felt comfort
But no longer in food
In something better
I felt it in you

I though I felt happiness
No more pain
I just thought up lies
To stop my silent cries

I never thought you'd hurt me
Break me appart
I never thought you'd be the one
To finally break my heart

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  • L0sT-iN-ThOuGhT
    November 9, 2008

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    awwww............

    I never thought you'd hurt me
    Break me appart
    I never thought you'd be the one
    To finally breakl my heart


    Love it dude.....


  • Sweet Chaotic Me
    November 9, 2008

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    I like this, especially the last 4 lines, there's just something about them. This is a good write, just 1 thing, on the last line you've written 'breakl' rather than 'break'. Apart from that, a lovely, rather tragic write.

    xox