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A Menacing Whisper

Waiting for the numbers to go up;
while sitting wondering when the weight goes down.
How much sanity is left?
And who knows how much hatred is right?

Directional focusing,
of latitudinal shallow footsteps;
and swift meetings in secret-
it seemed so much better with the thrill of the kill.

Scamper along
dear little prey.
A tasty snack for those broad planes;
Oh, but I forgot to mention:

There is no hiding in this game...

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