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What’s to live for
When everyone’s given up?
What’s to live for
When emptiness fills the void?
What’s to live for
When you don’t care anymore?
What’s to live for?
What’s to live for?

The sun will fail.
The sky will fall.
The ice will melt.
The wind will stop.
The world will end.
What’s to live for
Anymore?
Anymore?

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  • ixtli
    November 9, 2008

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    There are lots of things to live for. Live for the hope of tomorrow, to find out what happens at the end of today, to see the next sunrise, to be with someone you love, so you can enjoy chocolate, see the next spring. There are a lot of things to live for.

    Of course, what you put in your poem is quite true. Sometimes it seems like there is nothing to live for. And you've expressed that feeling wonderfully here.