amidst ruins
she finds muse,
memories wiped away;
heart lighter
hands turned wings,
all the floor at her
gentle feet.
she danced,
rejuvenating feelings
burying melancholy
washing stains of engraved.
time lost it's purpose
still,
fresh eyes glancing
all around, ecstatic,
she is in trance
unaware of herself.
vestiges crumbled
what ever is right
finds it's echo in love.
Author notes
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Picture Credit: http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Angel-69859594
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Anyone? by chilali.
655 points, ended November 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very nice take on the picture. I love the second stanza a lot. I love the imagery here in this piece. Well done. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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excellent my friend
you seem to see much deeper them most and it comes through beautifully
amidsts ruins
she finds muse,
memories wiped away;
heart lighter
hands turned wings,
all the floor
at her gentle feet
wonderful
God bless you my friend...
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a wonderful take on the promt dad your imagery and emotions are brilliant good luck in the contest dad take care
maralisa
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