My breaths a mixture of
cigarettes and toothpaste
I know the heart I gave you
has been misplaced
And I'm fading into
smoke swirls of madness
But I love every single
second of my sadness
And your kiss is still in my mouth
much to my distaste
No amount of mouthwash
gets rid of this taste
And I'm intoxicated by
all of this madness
But I'm completely in
love with my sadness
Author notes
I love this background because it reminds me of menthol cigarettes.
Comments
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wow this was very well put together, I liked the kind of melacholy (sp?) you put into this. The way it seems kinda stark, but still relatable. Loves it!
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Beautiful
The way you write makes me sad. Why can I not write like you. I suck. You rock. Don't ever change. Lmfao
Okay well lets get to the real deal now.
I enjoy this poem. It reminds me of the mornings we smoke and I have the taste of Cigarettes and Toothpaste. Such a pleasing taste.
I really like this line,
"But I'm completely in
love with my sadness"
It's so... sad
Don't love your sadnessssssss
Keep writing beautiful<33
-Alana
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