I smile for you
For tonight we dance underneath the moon;
The shining in your eyes
I see finally where we are
From existence to imminent;
We share a past and future
For this I give to you
All I have become
Always
Author notes
Credit : http://lady-symphonia.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Vanity-94338096
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Anyone? by chilali.
655 points, ended November 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Nice take on the picture. I love the simplicity in this poem. Great work and thank you for entering. Good luck
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Wonderful take on the picture, delicate and tender to read, beautifully captured emotions. All the best in the contest
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Beautiful and creative. I like your take on the prompted picture, so different. Best of luck!
~Noor
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this is really great, what a powerful write, you captured something so beautiful with so few words, best of luck in the contest
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