Warm and creamy
Black and strong
Caffeine for comfort
All night long
A great cup of joe
Always is nice
Hot and piping
Or served over ice
So bring on the java
Several cups a day
Savor every single drop
Served whatever kind of way...
In a list
A contest entry
- i don't know by Trigger.
541 points, ended November 25, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i love coffee. winner. hands down.
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oh we'd be rather screwed without our coffee indeed
really great...each line was just...another cupfull of imagery! (forgive the weak pun)
i loved it good write!
very good my friend
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Absolutely wonderful...
And strangely craving a caffeine fix... lol!
Kinda visualised every line & they all sounded amazing...
Great narrative, rhyme & execution of the premise...
Well done!!!
Right, I'm off to make a cuppa... lol!
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Good to the last drop!
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mm mm coffee
odes to coffee are the best. this one dances off my tongue. thanks for spending some time on my page, i sometimes feel no one reads it but me
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Excellent bit of love for the bean.
If I wasn't already sloshing loops around my 9th
beer, I'd go make a cup of French press!
Great take on the prompt & g'luck
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do you even like coffee?? cos i coulda swore you didnt... anyways ... great piece!!!
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Of course I like it, if I remember correctly it is you that don't have a taste for it...
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lovely rhyme scheme... this made me really crave coffee XD lol. too bad my mom doesn't allow it in the house .
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