Here he comes again, that sucker in his boat
I think I'll have him this time, if these notes float
Every day he comes out here searching for fish
I really hope he takes MY bait...it's my wish
How stupid does he think that fish really are?
To try and catch us, they come from near and far
YES, I think he sees it...revenge will be sweet
If he grabs it good and tight, then I'LL defeat
In a list
A contest entry
- Giggle Time... by Silent Cougar.
700 points, ended November 26, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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being a keen fisherman, do you know how many times i've thought along the same lines,,, why the hell am I here and why are they not taking the bait,, and the answer,,,they've already reeled me into sitting by the loch side like a loony watching a float bob up and down for hours,, hooked I'd say..fantastic piece,, thank you. just had to re comment..
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Lovely, I can see the damn fish just sitting and waiting. A real chuckle with this one. Great stuff. Hope you get gold.
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So cute and funny. I love the picture. What an image of that fish out there trying to get his revenge. No better way than to dangle a note in front of him. Fantastic little write with a great deal of humor that makes the morning start wonderfully.
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Lol. A good one. With the economy like it is he'll have a whole basket full in no time. Good luck in the contest this has to be a contender. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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Lol Wonderful! Once again you raise the humour stakes at AP
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Now this is what we need, brilliant...being a fisherman, this got my tickly bit teased.
Your words are so close to what I thought when I seen it,, very clever,, and funny like I asked for, well done and thank you for entering.
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