When the sun met the sky
The crystalline mountains were for you and I
But every moment is never here
And now our fantasy world has expired
Finally logic and percpetion are together as one again
There was a silence in Jarai
Lenticular clouds in the sky
Was there shear to prevent everything?
Because the sun was in your eyes again
And happiness reprises
Summoning the warm wind again upon the grassy fields
Love had gone into space
A bolide or meteor's place
And when then snow fell down
Now perception and logic are alive
Among the clear waters of our being
Now 300 years have passed
And every moment on Jarai I see you
Finally the fireflies have passed
Into the summer of our memory
Would I find a reverie again?
Because I need empirical methodology
And even art as well
So now I return again
To my mind's realm of discovery
Finally 400 years have passed
And every time on Jarai I need you
A contest entry
- Avant-Garde As Possible by Mr Id.
400 points, ended November 11, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ Cherished Prewrites ~ by Sunkissed xo.
1000 points, ended November 15, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What an interesting write! You express your thoughts and feelings nicely with an underlying sense of passion, beauty and romance. Well done! Thanks for entering the contest
peace xx -
This is actually about a planet on an anime series that gave me an excuse to go progressive.
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Wow- such an enjoyable journey through time!
And some of this language I will have to make a note of, as I hadn't heard it before.
Also, it has encouraged me to research the Jarai tribe, which was very obscure and interesting! Thanks!
Nice work and luck to you!
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