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echoes

you know how sometimes when youre
sitting alone and you think you hear your
cell phones ring tone somewhere far away
but its not ringing and you think youre going
                                                        insane??

you know how sometimes when youre
sitting alone and you think you hear his
voice somewhere close by and you just
want him to hold you one last time?

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  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    November 9, 2008

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    amazing...

    there isnt really any structure here but the parallel you present is beautiful. i dont know if you meant it like this, but my impulse upon reading this is to associate insanity not only with the first stanza, but with the second as well. as if you shouldnt want him yet you still do for some crazy reason.
    love... insanity... whats the difference really.