The good ole days
when we sweat naked and fast...
I'd give you a goose
and thou-st squeal out a blast.
Cinnamon swirls
amidst
voyeuristic pearls.
Never thought I
you'd give me the lurch.
Thank god for the net,
amateur porn,
and women's scorn.
Along with 411
I found you again
my 7th Heaven.
Playing hard to get
with nasty notes
masquerading as
court ordered quotes.
If restraints are the toast
break out the cuffs,
a little leather,
a lot of wire,
and an automobile battery
to wet my desire.
The situation just got stickier.
Author notes
Natchstucco
"and that's the reason I had to get a restrain order
against Garfield."
A contest entry
- Time for some laughs, Name Prompt. by Rob..
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
say what?
Comments
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Edgy and as always capturing your spirit within the lines! Good job and congrats on the Shine! ~Tia


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well now.
not the prompt but hey, I break rules all the time.
car batteries and desire don't mix, ouch I say, ouch...lol
I like this, nice imagery and quite creative...
great job!


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LOL you have certainly let your creativity help you here, vivid images with this...


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waiting waiting
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Testing me huh?
Natch being a slang term for "naturally", "sure", "of course", and stucco being a concrete based material spread by trowel on exterior surfaces..(I prefer hardy-plank myself), so one might venture too guess...
naturally adhesive, or hard.....cling-on...lol
so....how about..
"and that's the reason I had to get a restrain order
against Garfield."
(makes sense right?)
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I hope you didnt mean the garfield cat, cause i blew it then...
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