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I Guess...

The sky is blue,
but that is nothing new.
The ground beneath my feet
is an underbrush filled
with brown things.
It's all very boring.
It puts me to sleep
as the song in my mind
plays on repeat.

I feel like I'm falling down
and there is nothing
under my feet.
I must have jumped
off of a cliff somewhere,
but I don't remember.
Sometime ago
I must have been at a bar,
cause I smell the booze on me.
I guess, I just don't care right now.

The sea is a soft color of green,
but there's nothing to lean on.
This rock,
that I choose to make skip,
is very smooth and flat.
I think it's time to fall asleep
under a darken night filled with stars.
I'm just a little bored.
I guess, this is the end
of another day ,
that I should've spent in my bed.
I guess...

Author notes

I wanted to get my feeling of boredom across.... please tell me if I got that across to your mind....

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Does this one make you feel bored?

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Comments

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  • corrupt angel
    December 17, 2008

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    Your random rant of boredom make me smile. I just read another piece before this one about falling asleep. Oh the coincidences! Anyway, this was entertaining, I must say!
  • Trigger
    November 25, 2008
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    yes. i hate your background though.

  • Alt
    November 10, 2008

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    yes u got that across that u were bored. lol. I guess I have to get to ur house very soon so u can be out of ur boredom state.
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