lost in thoughts
ripping at the edge
trails of a broken heart
cling to the ledge
this is the moon
covered in blood
release is soon
drowning in mud
enter my pain
soon be a part
tears covered by rain
beating at my heart
poison on a spoon
take my last breath
blood on the moon
this is my death
Author notes
tell me what you think
A contest entry
- I want your darkest of dark poetry. by Chelse-Oh.
950 points, ended November 21, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Simple and sweet but you get the point of the piece out very nicely. Great job. I wouldn't say to change really anything. good luck in the contest. ~Chelsey
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wow
very deep and thooughtful...good write.
and thanks for the comment
♥Katie
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