All signs read stop
yet he never even yielded
and she cried in the dark;
as nine month past
she finds her smile again
in a precious child of forgiveness
~who will never know his name.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #33 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on the deserved gold sweety. The pain that falls on a heart is occluded with the precious arrival that brings an everlasting smile. Great write.
Love,
Sun and stars shine no brighter than you! -
This is brilliance, I am at a loss for words here, when I thought up this prompt it was with this idea in mind. Outstanding poet. Best to you in the contest
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a outstanding poem sis very deep powerful and in life we all seem to go through this journey until we find ourself again wonderful as always sis take care good luck in the contest sis
maralisa
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Really incredible. So much profoundness and a heartfelt expression of the extreme suffering.
It's Gold.
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well done...
unyeilding and no conscience
yes, always the womans cross to bear
and yet we find love and meaning within the fruit of forgiveness
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A wonderful take on the prompt, you are so good at taking the unexpected road.
Very Good....Best wishes in the contest.
Love
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Wow, this is very deep and a great
thought for the given prompt! Good
luck to you here and thanks a lot for
sharing it!
Jeremy0826
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