My muse
Bemused me to epic insanity
A virgin lusting profanity
I think of you
A glimpse of my fantasies
Unhindering my reality
Maddening my integrity
Transcending cruelty
Dance twilit my thorns
Sedative, exposed, torn
Voluptuous desires
Ensnared Macumba fires
A damsel in distress
Or am I?
You injudicious fool
I’m your untamed mistress
Tonight you’ll witness
Mouth stirring lingam
Your Kama sutra
My forbidden Buddha
Groans, moans merge
Illicit thirst quenched
Bodies drenched
Neck fleshed in bare tranquility
Lips spread in burning fatality
Your tongue titillates a sin
Oh so yearningly
I lose my grip
And let you win
Infatuation overflows
As sensation nibbles
Passions penetrate and sores
As our pace triples
Ecstasy awaits
Heightened pleasures
Convulsing accumulates
Orgasmic screams
Agonizes and beams
Have I known you?
In a reincarnated eclipse?
Drips of sexual pre-condemned
Bloody tasted sips
I imagine you with whips
I’m no angel
Beautiful and lethal
A whore dressed in
A Saints medieval.
Author notes
I think I reached the climax of MADDNESS!!!
This contest aroused my muse!
Even though my poem might seem very random & spontaneous, it’s not =)
*Evil Grin 
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Word Prompt:
Love so raw you could stab it with a fork
pickled emotions
... i guess lol.
A contest entry
- 1 Spoof 2 Pic Prompts 3 Word Banks 4 Phrase Prompts by lunarlunacy.
1017 points, ended November 16, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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Raw reality
Naked in its sweaty flesh this piece burns with the flames of a rose untouched, the desire of of every naughty muse to press forward and hear the screams of opening the unexplored depths surrounded by her desire that clings to his firmness like his own flesh.
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Very nice. It was different but a good different it showed so much passion.
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Enticing!
Individual, very uniquely written, full of passion as you took me, and engulfed me.
I the reader was carried on you every word. this is what I liked the most about it ... I could not get enough.
Very well, and I me very, written.
Great write!
You have won this reader. Can't wait to read more of you.
Send me some of your other works.
Please ...
You are an enjoyable read.
Bless you.
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it is very grafic but very good not to metion very inspiering
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Outstanding
The flow of this poem really stands out and the imagery was breathtaking- full of passion. From the title I was not expecting to read such a sensual poem but I enjoyed reading this. Best of luck in the contest.
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WOW!!! i gotta say i had to google half of the expressions and big words you have in here but none the less i loved it even with out translation lol! i find the phrase "so sexual, so raw u can stab it with a fork" to be more true LOL!
i liked the way u kinda stoped expressing every now and then and had a question every now and then..
i loved everything about this one the lust and emotions flowed it is amazing..
good luck on the contest
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Wow. There are a lot of big words in this piece..lol I couldn't follow a set rhyme scheme but many of the lines seemed to rhyme which is incredible considering the type of words you used throughout this poem. I've never seen a poem with such short lines done this well. I vaguely grasped what the poem was saying but I understood enough to say good job! And the last 4 lines seemed so strong. I noticed a few grammatical errors but there weren't many and I'm sure if you reread it thoroughly you'll catch them. Overall I think it was pretty good.
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Wow, this piece has the potential for gold. Every phrase is incredible as it follows your lead down this seductive path you have created. Just some grammatical errors.
As sensations nibbles
Passions penetrates and sores
should be,
as sensation nibbles
passion penetrates and soars
There are also more after that, I can also help with those if you would like, but I think if you just read through a couple more times you will spot them. I am sure with your muse spilling such genius you had no time for grammatical detail
Blue~
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I love it...
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very sexy i loved it
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'illicit thirst quenched ;; bodies drenched'...that was WOW. 'i lose my grip ;; and let you win'. i liked this loss of grip
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love it, thanks for sharing
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well while this contest aroused your muse, I think your musings aroused me LOL. great write, esp. the second half. STELLAR! Thank you for sharing this piece here. Best of luck, I see silver sheens in your future LOL
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That’s odd, why do I see gold sheens that seductively beam in MY future? LOL!!!!
*smiles an angelic smile of a kind not even satin could resist*
Ha-ha
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Okay NOW am done, lol... no more adding
feel free to judge!!!
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LOOOL!!! ahmm... Well, I keep adding to it, and everytime i do... it takes a twisted dark turn.
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