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Just Out of Reach

Faint whispers
Fake smiles
Elusive Touches
A dream.

That's all
You have become.

Her mind dances
Around the thought of you
Picking up tempo
And then
Slowly dying.

She reaches out
As far as she dares
Only to have your teeth
Grace her skin.

Drawing back
She hides her tears
And paints a fake face on
To make you happy.

The more you shove
And push away
The more she wants
And loves you.

But you're always
Just out of her arms reach
No matter how hard
And how long
She tries.

Silently she sits
Alone
Patient
Whispering your sweet name.

Author notes

Alrighty.
Well, I have been gone for a long time, but I am back. First add, nope not good, but I needed something new.

So, the story:
I still love the guy who broke my heart first. And he doesn't love me back. So, grab what you wish in this, it's kind of confusing I think o.O
I thought of it, and just ran with it. After it was done, I'm not sure what happened XD

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  • LovesPlayToy
    December 22, 2008

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    Wow this is great!! This is very sad... but the imagery is amazing!btw when I get on my real comp I will give u applause I can't do it wit my cell phone


  • XxPyroxX
    November 21, 2008

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    I like it!!


  • XxXpurplevampiresXxX
    November 10, 2008
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    <3


  • tiredxofxsunsets
    November 9, 2008

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    i loved this so much!! this is exactly how i was feeling just a little while ago. it sucks. alot. this poem captured so my emotion, i was almost ready to cry about how it like completly described how i feel about this one guy.

    But you're always
    Just out of her arms reach
    No matter how hard
    And how long
    She tries.
    ^^ looooved it


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    November 8, 2008

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    aw this was sweet XD I liked it!!! and yeah love always stays even if you break, you still love the person even if you don't know it... love is confusing >.<;"" Haha, anyhoo, Amazing poem, love it and keep up the work!! :}

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