Fantasy love in the moonlight
Where the eye cannot see,
Where the night takes us
It is where we want to be.
Love is for the taking
Beyond the sunny morn,
God blessed us with this love.
Fantasy love in the moonlight
Makes my misery fade
The heat is rising
No room for the shade.
Love is for the making
Beyond the rising of the sun
Love is not forsaking
All the deeds we've done.
Author notes
Fantasy love in the moonlight
Where the eye cannot see,
Where the night takes us
It is where we want to be.
Love is for the taking
Beyond the sunny morn,
God blessed us with this love.
Fantasy love in the moonlight
Makes my misery fade
The heat is rising
No room for the shade.
Love is for the making
Beyond the rising of the sun
Love is not forsaking
All the deeds we've done.
A contest entry
- Fantasy love in the moonlight by Lady Michaella.
490 points, ended November 14, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice.
0.15 -
very lovely textures and layers to enjoy in this poem.
I would have softened that last line a little bit....
love is not forsaking
the gifts of heavens passion
shining purest love.
i enjoyed your poem immensely!
Our creator is the king of love and
wisely he created us to feast each other
with tender and pure hearts.
ears/Seattle
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This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
summer51
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This is a beautiful poem my friend
so shaweeeeet indeed,
i was gonna enter this contest aswell, but...
anyway good luck
and thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment
Ken
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