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The girl you used to know

Cold but alive
body lying on the floor
she's the girl you used to know but you don't know her anymore
everything changed only a second passed
her life fell to pieces but no one ever asked
her blood stains the carpet
and her handprints trailed the walls
but no one ever noticed and of her faults
The darkness that consumed her
left her hollow at her best
but a perfect mask of happiness
convinced she's better than the rest
The girl you knew died long ago
This girl is not the same
forget what you think you knew
she only plays her game
hiding is no challenge when it's all you've ever known
but coming out into the open
Is a challenge rarely known
Admitting there's a problem
admitting somethings wrong
it harder than to fix it
when you denied it all along
blood and tears
brusies, pain
tired of it all
can't handle it anymore
one. two. tree. she falls
Cold but alive
body lying on the floor
she's the girl you used to know, but you don't know her....anymore.


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  • starving4perfection
    November 12, 2008
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    aww its reallly sad i felt the emotions in it when i read it keep it uppppp!