my soul
is not supposed to be cold
I never meant to break your heart
it broke mine so many times
is it worth it to survive?
will I find another life?
it's such a struggle to smile sometimes
the breath in my lungs
suffocating me
tears locked up behind my eyes
rendering me
emotionless
is it worth it to survive?
will I find another life?
will I find, once again, my smile?
I'm so sorry
my dearest love, departed
I never meant to break your heart
why must my soul be so cold?
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11-01-08
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it cuts both ways when hearts are hurt, and loves once deep do sadly die. it is not any specific trial that causes us to lose that feeling, it is indifference to our feelings and that sickening feeling you get when you leave and then the one who seemed untouched by us when they had us suddenly wants to become everything we begged and pleaded for. hearts do grow cold over time and over so many opportunities given and shunned. it does not mean that we as a person are cold, just that we as a person have grown cold towards that which was for so long cold towards us. good poem.
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Amazing
A very sincere, poignant and delicate write, its like being taken into a teardrop before it falls ... well done
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i thank thee ever so much
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