Alone in the night
I find myself lost in shadows.
Knowing nothing of where I am
simply adrift in airy nothingness.
Feeling as if I'm an astral spirit
effortlessly floating in blissful absence.
So i fine myself remembering that I'm,
no madder how i might word it,
lost in the shadows.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Picture contest by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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This is definitely creative. Astral self. I haven't had anyone else use that creative way yet. Good job. This poem reads well and keeps the readers attention well too. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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That is an awesome write sweety...And you are never alone..You are among true friends
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