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Let me pluck the stars out of your thoughts one by one while your lap baby sit me just for a moment for a
private love cruise. Tonight the bubbly of love over suds the world with the moon, the stars, our love.


As I open up the dresser draw to your heart I search for the perfect lingerie to behold your smile tenderly in a romantic tale. This particular time the pharoses can’t see how I slept in the rapture of your lullaby rushing the exact hour that I can search your face for the freedom.

 

Just read my thumping pulse it will tell you that I am the highest bidder that will love you until this world end then we will rebirth love in a new clothe trend. I gave you a love marrow to keep you alive even if it meant to truly love your love and to watch you fly away from me.

 

The moon will remind you of my tune, the stars will lead you to me through a stormy fog, our love was wed through the ink that scared love In a joyful stain tattooed .

 

I dive into your color coated lips, sip the wine from your divine caress, be my valentine in this sea of jazzy love fest. As you embrace me with the stroke of your pen, my thoughts within spill onto the bed of your rendezvous, as my lust for you spills over within the bubbly of your love.

 

As the piano keys tap with soft fingertips in the background, you’re my ebony, and I’m your ivory! Speaking words of fantasy, let it be. Lay beside me until the early morn, my love, my chocolate kiss, thanks to your love, I’ve been reborn.

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Thanks for reading myself and Jewels.

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  • penman gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    Wonderful

    A very powerful write. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    "Let me pluck the stars out of your thoughts one by one while your lap baby sit me just for a moment for a
    private love cruise. Tonight the bubbly of love over suds the world with the moon, the stars, our love."

    first off brilliant start and to the poem as a whole, purely golden, keep it flowing

    • theredcatjazzoflove
      November 15, 2008
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      some body finally like my part crackin up thanks hon i think me and Mushy may want to write more often this poem is loaded with comments

  • poetryrocksmysox
    November 12, 2008

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    Wow,

    Love what you have done here, capturing the fun, loving spirit as you pen this masterpiece. I'm not sure what the guy below is talking about, but this work here is fresh! Keep that ink flowing, and thanks for sharing here.

    K.


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      November 12, 2008
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      oh boy thanks dear me and mushy we ducking and dodging paparazzi we are just to hot for poetry t.v. thanks i have like my own style and i love the fact that Tim is one of the bold artist that will work with another bold artist as myself

  • tomisb
    November 11, 2008

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    Quite a confession of love and a beautiful celebration of it embrace. I would double check for typos and lyrical flow because it distracts from the beauty of this poem. Congratulations to both on you for working well together.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Lovely collaboration...no hint of where one left and the other came in lines...Beautiful lines, imagery. Romance given it's place in charming fashion, sensual words here....Altogether a lovely write!


  • smiley
    November 10, 2008

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    awesome

    this was a beautiful collab... the last stanza sums it all up nicely...


    Yvonne


  • Aimee Hill
    November 10, 2008

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    Hmm...sweet...sensual...kinda left my mouth watering just a bit. I have to agree with the majority here...that last bit really threw me for a whirl!

    I've been reborn...captured me.

    Awesome job you two!!


  • Lonely
    November 10, 2008

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    I've been reborn.
    Perfect ending. For me the start and the end of the poem are the ones that captivate the most, and this poem has a perfect start and a perfect ending. Beautiful love poem.. I loved it

    Love,
    Lonely


  • Dream Weaver
    November 9, 2008
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    This is phenomenal. Very visual and smooth.


  • darell
    November 9, 2008

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    Nice

    a pretty cool write that lurks around
    the corners of erotic passion.
    I felt the fire trying to lite but felt
    it lost its fervor in the mix of well
    framed phrases. Still it was cool

  • Sunkissedrose
    November 9, 2008

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    Amazing

    The last line, I love. Speaking words of fantasy, Let it be....just amazing. You two have penned a perfect symphony of poetic love. Great Write as always.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    wow!

    stunningly beautiful you two!! great romantic coupling of sweet poetry! impressed I am..


  • moon2u
    November 9, 2008
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    well done you two


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    LOL, this makes me giggle...my chocolate kiss? ..Like Hershey's? You know they have many flavors now, like cherry and mint....Even a choice of nuts, LOL...maybe I should have known better, Right? But I just had to click.....could not help myself even though in the back of my mind I heard the whispers "no...no...you know what this is!"

    LOL. Nice work and beautiful words that are way over my head, LOL.

    Hugs!!!
    Cayla


  • SevenHundredSeventy
    November 8, 2008

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    I like this unusual style! The internal rhyme keeps it flowing along like a song. The imagery is quite original. One question though, 2nd stanza, 1st line, should it be 'dresser drawer'? Just curious. Great read.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Ms Lez
    November 8, 2008

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    'i dive into the color coated lips, sip the wine from ur divine caress' --- it is wonderful. I liked it. the whole poem is very interesting.

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Outstanding work the two of you did here!
    Well done and it's always great to read another
    write and collaboration by the two of you!
    Keep up the wonderful work and thanks a lot
    for sending this one my way.




    Jeremy0826


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    beautiful words...mmmm chocolate kiss. that sounds very tasty. Great piece you have here, with soothing imagery. i think the last stanza is my favorite part. fits well with your background. I love it

  • Stardust-luvr
    November 8, 2008

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    wow the passion in both of yours' words brings forht daydreams and tears of wishes lost in the rains of our hearts once sung in harmony. well done and many blessings always xxxxxxxxx

    . Rewarded 4


  • EeyoreUK
    November 8, 2008
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    nice to read your writings again, I should visit more often
  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008

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    Outstanding

    Loving the mood surrounding the write, the heart that went into it and the soul that traveled the depths to create it. Well done.

    . Rewarded 4


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    November 8, 2008

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    OMG! its so slammin dude and this is our writers block side tissue please! we so rock dude gosh you so pulled this off totally perfect i love it i shall add it to my list we rock dude!

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