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Zombiefied

My boyfriend's a zombie
roaming the night
in ambercrombie.
I think it really flatters him
regardless of the tatters.
There's a grey cast to his flesh
and he doesn't smell so fresh.
But he rises
from the dead you know

with a little
zombie fellatio...

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hoodoolover

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  • soulfultia gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Your humor spilled right out in this one! Your mind is always in the deep end girl! ha!! An entertaining poetic spill ~Tia


  • Rob. gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    grins

    very nice take on the prompt, subtle yet clever and funny...

    great job.


  • natchstucco
    November 15, 2008
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    dont know why my clappy heads didnt apply?!


  • sunoir
    November 15, 2008
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    Yep he's a stiff alright *LOL*

  • ea silver member
    November 11, 2008
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    omg, VERY funny rhyme! This is a sure-fire crowd pleaser.

  • natchstucco
    November 9, 2008

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    I hoodoo, know what is and what should be, hoodoo, being the name given to the formations in the dry Arizona vastness. Lol, that is so funny. Dang zombie dude.

  • Rob. gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Funny.

    Naa Ea, I gots this no prob.

    Hoodoo is an American term (thought widely but never proven, it is most probably an African term), closely related to the term "voodoo", but most notably related to "folk magic", my fav. reference has to be the old folk song "cotton eyed joe"...(not the 90's remix).

    It has mystical roots and is basically a term used for "tricking", (hence the song analogy), or "conjuring" (can ya whip up some Marilyn Monroe to go please?"...lol), but is most easily described as this...

    African's/Haitians call it Hoodoo
    Ignorant white folk call it Voodoo

    Since "lover" is at the end I have to believe you enjoy mysticism, be it at whatever level, and since I don't want to look at anyone's page, (kinda takes the fun out of it), I will have to go with....

    "My Girlfriends a Zombie!"

    ..


    Since I can't tell your gender by your user name feel free to change it too suit...





  • ea silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    whoops, looks like the host didn't know what to make of this name. I have to admit, I didn't know what a hoodoo was either when I first saw your name. Maybe they will check your page

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