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No Other Like You

no on else can do what you do
no one else  quite like you
the way you look
the way you smell
the way you cook
i cannot tell
tell you how i feel
cus to me no one else is real
so whats the deal

are you with me or not
cus i really like you alot
are you faking
boy you making,me sweat
you were so funny the first day we met
you were so cute
i was so tall
you were so fitted
i wasn't at all
but the way you looked at me
i knew our love was true
like i said there's no other like you

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  • Trill - Trickle
    April 23

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    What an adorable poem!
    I enjoyed this write from you Charlene!

    Great write, from a great poet!

    Sincerely,
    ~Trill~

  • ChristiMarie
    November 10, 2008
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    Good

    I really like this poem and it really speaks to me


  • Bella Cullen
    November 10, 2008

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    aww. i thought this poem was cute. but it is the truth we can not live with or without them. love is tricky sometimes...it is hard to tell if it is true or not. by the emotion in this poem it feels like it is true love and you are the only one who can since that right from the start, and you are trying to get the guy to notice you and fall in love with you. i love this poem.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 10, 2008

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    You typed quit for quite, other than that this is a great poem...for a beginning artist...it had lots of depth and soul keep up the good work, but, keep your mind off the boys (lol) means lots of love.

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