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Eye In my heart

Lavish affection; male scent lingers,
as he walks hallway of my mind.

Grasp his heart in my hands
treasure his love forever.

Express just one sign of eternity
feel his warming within my soul.

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Option 1

Picture Credit: http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Angel-69859594

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  • SoulWhispher
    November 10, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt, you have indeed captured the essence of the contest, your poetry as always reachs out and touches the heart of the reader, great job, blessings with love John


  • chilali
    November 10, 2008

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    A very good take on the picture, I must say. Nicely written. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • Canadamomma
    November 8, 2008

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    Lavish affection; male scent lingers,
    as he walks hallway of my mind.

    I love those lines
    Great take; good luck in the contest