Branching out into the open;
forks in the road, not knowing.
Cooling breath, keeps on blowing.
Shape shifting, shadows seem, follow.
Raining tears, never ending.
Perfume scent always lingering
Sun’s hands open bleak tunnels.
Arms stretching out, music harp
plays, opening rainbows door,
cascade of butterflies flutter free.
Harmony uplifts heart. Sun's beams
transports mind into a realm passion.
Held in his arms,ignites soul, love.
Author notes
http://kil1k.deviantart.com/art/Forgotten-tree-46169645
A contest entry
- picture prompt by transit.
690 points, ended December 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a thought- provoking write and it is unique and from a very different point of view. The imagery is amazing and I love how almost every line relates to nature.
I feel the last line was not a good ending though but overall, the poem was interesting and different. Good luckies!
transit~
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This is a great take on the picture prompt, you have penned a most wonderfull poem that reaches out to the reader, you never as said before cease to amaze, blessings with love John
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