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the Walk Along the Clouds

She often came here just for the view.
Taking a walk among the clouds.
Enjoying the view, often a friend came too.

There was something strange about today.
Nothing she could  really understand.
Something was about to happen, who knew?

This is how it is in Heaven.
She liked the c loud search in the late of day.
Friends met after going up.

She had a note that said
Meet a friend at sundown.
Dress pretty and just wait around.

Well she had best change her view.
There might be someone important.
I just wonder who?

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 20, 2008

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    so beautiful and softly flows like wispy clouds on a windy day...i could just picture within my mind her dancing among the clouds of love...excellent


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    This is a beautiful interpretation of the prompt, the beautiful images you created were endless. Best to you in the contest


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    Wonderful Poem!!!!!!!!!

    A lovely poem you have pened my dear friend. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. This was so uplifting. Hugs and Smiles. You take care, Sandy