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What Moves Me Closer To You

Just when I feel I’ve had enough
You come up to me and put your arms around me
Holding me close;
“I will never let you go.”

It’s times like these
That I realize just how much you mean to me
When you hold me close;
“I will never let you go.”

There are times
That I feel as if we are drifting
And its suddenness knocks me off my feet
And I’m scared; so scared.

There are times
Where I feel as if we should rush into things
And the fear of the unknown chokes me
And I’m scared; so scared.

But what moves me closer to you
Is your unconditional love
And I know everything’s going to be okay

What makes me fall in love with you over and over again
Is that I know, that with you
Everything’s going to be okay.

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kitsmith

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  • PureRomance
    November 9, 2008

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    Beauty (Love in it's truest form)

    You did a marvelous job with this poetic masterpiece. I'm glad that I gave you this title to work with. You did an awesome job with it. Keep up the excellent work and God bless you always in everything that you do and write and best of luck to you and your poem in this contest.