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The Day she fell into the Sky


A prayer to Saint Joan of Arc

The day you fell into the sky
In a black cloud of smoke
You set my world on fire
With your love

With my heart for my brain
And my brains in my arse
No disrespect intended
I lived with the error of my ways

Wishing no one to be in Hell
Wanting all to be well
I wished everyone the best
At their end a blessed rest

Pray me peace on my day of death
That my longing last request
Though I sailed on sin's seas
I only wanted to do my best

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  • SandraMVeinot
    November 29, 2008

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    she must of been something...

    love was never meant to hurt, or be apart...

    thank you for the read...


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    Lovely Poem

    Good morning Wesley, What a wonderful poem to read this Sunday morning. It is so heartfelt and is a pleasure to read. I think we all have done things we regret but God's love is all about forgivness. His love is amazing. Hugs and Smiles. Bless you my friend.

    Peace and Grace,
    Sandy