I swore to myself I would never go there again
I swore it without my fingers crossed
I couldn’t take it anymore, so I walked away
Never to even turn back around
But you stayed still and strong
Beckoning my return
And my heart betrayed me
I’m falling for you all over again
Author notes
WingedWolf
A contest entry
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Comments
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The end line brought this to a nice and orderly close. This simple piece was full of emotion, and made sure that the reader knew it. I appreciate this piece. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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This is beautiful and sad
There's mixed emotions in this, but I love it. This happens to so many people and it's heartbreaking on why two people can fall out of love so easily and then jump right back into it. The message in this piece was brilliand and I've expected less than what you've gotten here which is a very good thing. God bless you and best wishes in the contest. -
Oh that's cool
Pretty decent work my friend.
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