There's no one like him
heaven knows he can't be kept
and they sent him down
to bless us with such a sweet, soft scent
Boy so strong, just like his dad,
only joys right now are easily met
years will pass, some good
some bad, but each year
Special, because of this little
man. Hearts are melting
in the room. He's perfect beauty,
loved wholly, his grace
evolves in his nurturing home.
Author notes
acrostic,
picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Photo Prompt Done Your Way by OldBear34.
900 points, ended November 22, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
What a great creation So very deserving of the silver.
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I don't often see acrostics on this site and I actually like acrostics when they are done correctly...and this one is. You did not just simply make a list, you wrote a poem and that poem has a meaning... that is how an acrostic should play out.
very well done!
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awwwwwwww!!!! hugs him all up! what a cutie loved that you posted your pic with your poem. this is a beautiful read. God bless you and your little man. gets nostalgic for when mine were so small.
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That couldn't have been easy. I want a new one, too- not that I don't appreciate what I have, but... Lovely write, girl!
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Interesting View!
I like your approach; that you can appreciate my grandson so much and draw on my emotions so well is amazing. I like your poem a lot!
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Nice acrostic.
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