Wall’s painting is falling like her words
A world collapsing into ashes
Burning with an unfulfilled desire
To rule
Never fatigued to give up
She spines on shoes of dreams
Black as her thoughts
Drowning
She ought not seek what's not hers
Thus she seizes her dress
And drowns in her
Black hopes
Author notes
Contest prompt:
30-60 words on option #1:
Picture Credit: http://zemotion.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Angel-69859594
Poem= 54 word
Ylova these were amazing pictures.
Thanks for reading!
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Anyone? by chilali.
655 points, ended November 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Amazing imagery...wow!Catchy words at the beginning "Walls hangings falling" and the phrase at the end"she seizes her black dress and drowns in her black hopes"..that really makes an impact to your write!
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"drowns in her black hopes" Wow! What great imagery you have portrayed in this piece. I really enjoyed it. I am glad you like the pictures
Thank you for your entry and good luck. 
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"She ought not seek what's not hers
Thus she seizes her dress
And drowns in her
Black hopes"
Beautiful stanza
best of luck in the contest!!
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Well done
So very awesome, you do the picture so much justice with your words. Her picture is yours. Fine job -
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
You describe the picture so beautifully sis!'s
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