ending is near
the looks you
give are very clear.
another cheat another lie
those words you spoke to me
were full of them.
can't hind from the truth
i see right to the full
amount you which you are.
dying in the place were you
raise to be the little fake person
that you are.
i could hate you
i could hate you
for every waking day
i have to see you.
but i choise not to,
i rather watch you stuggle
and burn at the end.
full of lies
full of deceate
full of full of loving fakeness
that covers unloveable pain all over your
face.
i've grown
and you just sit
with her and watching
self go under and
you see me smile
while i have happely
moved on.
A contest entry
- Thoughts & Emotions by albinoblacksheep720.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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aw wow! very clear emotions!
"i've grown
and you just sit
with her and watching
self go under and
you see me smile
while i have happely
moved on." amazing! thanks for your entry and good luck! -
Brilliant! the emotion is so intense. I can feel your hurt and anger which come from such un called for lies. fantastic...thank you for entering my contest
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Nice...
I have strong connection to that. That was beautiful. I like, no, love it. Great job. Good luck.
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wow another good 1
keep on writing
your friend,
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veyr nice job.... aww so much feeling here... great job!
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This is a really good poem. Good job
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Beautiful as I always .I like your style.Quite sad . Good job !
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