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Seasons Change

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My mood blends
with the burgundy background
of a rigid tree,
as its last bits of hope  
dwindle to the ground
and shrivels before it

Nothing to blanket
frozen finger-like limbs
stretched towards God, 
praying for the loss of beauty
or possibly its purpose

No longer does it cast
thick shadows to cool grass
from the scorching heat of the sun's breath,
or a cozy home that tiny animals seek.
No longer can it lend protection
for birds that used to nest in its crevices,

but it stands sturdy and tall,
naked and proud,
dedicated in a prayer
that will soon be answered (yet, again)
in another season’s change


 

 

 

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Credit pic: http://kil1k.deviantart.com/art/Forgotten-tree-46169645

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  • transit
    December 1, 2008

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    ooo

    I love the way the tree was portrayed like a human being.The feelings are real and the imagery is awesome. The background fit perfectly and made me want to read more. Good luck!!

    transit~


  • sunoir
    November 17, 2008

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    I loved how you took human emotion and made the tree come to life. While contrasting it to your own emotions, "my mood blends". I agree sad but with a uplifting life renewal. kudos

  • tara wilson gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    beautiful, sad, but i feel hope within the last stanza


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Fantastic imagery in here. I felt sadness and loss.. but then hope at the end! Beautifully done!


  • kyle052411
    November 8, 2008

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    Excellent! You can see every aspect of the tree portrayed during life and after death. I've never written a poem about a picture. I need to give it a try one day. Keep up the good work!


    • Catie Sheeran gold member
      November 8, 2008
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      you really should! It's one of my fav types of contest...if you stare at the pic long enough, you will come up with a story

  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008

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    Remarkable

    An outstanding, chilling write. It indeed touches and speaks a warmth to the soul that has lived , seen,and appreciate life's seasons. beautifully done, thank you for this read.

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