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Sky Swallowers






I'll grow from here
  and there, to be
something longer, larger, and freer
than they have ever been.

I'll take place, and grip
  down in the little cracks
where the empty is
    to grow up and fill the skies
with heaven's bigger, brighter skins.








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Project 86, Stien's Theme, the bridge.

-thefallout

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Oh this is really different and so creative! An excellent piece indeed. Really out of the box this one! Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene