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Hannah's Racecar

Verse 1
Did I ever cross you mind
Well this will be
The last time you cross mine

Can you look me in the face
I want to see
The look on yours
When I drive away


Pre-chorus
What could I be jealous of
Your Something to look down on


Chorus
If these streets could talk
We all know what they'd say
Tell you to take your best shot
You only get one, so don't get carried away


Verse 2
When you fall
And are ready to scream
Who will you see
What will you be

When you fall
Down onto your knees
Will you take with heart
Will you remember me


Pre-chorus
What could I be jealous of
Your Something to look down on


Chorus
If these streets could talk
We all know what they'd say
Tell you to take your best shot
You only get one, so don't get carried away

Solo/Bridge

Chorus 2x

Author notes

Please be honest and tell me what you think, i haven't written anything in a while.

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Comments

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  • emzy x3
    November 19, 2008
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    Es muy bien. Me gusta la mucha. Es facíl de relacionar a.

    me encanta la


  • infernalxfidelity
    November 14, 2008

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    hmmmmm....this was pretty good. i liked the first verse the best. the chorus was good too.

    i guess it was kinda just good all over.

    ~~julia


  • BAMFNx3
    November 9, 2008
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    Damn Michelle...just..damn. This was...great. I loved it. Fucking awesome job.


    I love you <3

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