Take this heart do with it what you will
When all is gone I'll be loving you still
Give me your love please say that you'll stay
Please dear one don't take it away
Take this heart I long for your time
Back to the days when you were still mine
Keep it until the days are no more
Then you can begin to open that door
The door that will capture our every day
I'll listen close to all you have to say
This door will keep this love that I give
You my love is for what I live
Let me give to you the best that I know
Please tell me that you will not go
So I'll wait for you till the end of time
Take this heart the one I call mine
Author notes
Written by michaeline.This poem is reserved and I understood the rules and have read them.
In a list
A contest entry
- For only poets up for a challenge by PureRomance.
700 points, ended December 3, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent write of sentiment and love...Well deserving of the honorable mention trophy!
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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Love is such a precious and unconditional emotion. The moment we give our heart to someone we also open up ourselves to the pain of a broken heart. As humans we will always seek, not always finding what we would like to have. This poem is inspiring as well as very heart warming, with some sadness laced in as well. Thank you very much for sharing!!!
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An Excellent Sharing Of Your Heart. Thank You! Well expressed and easily understood.
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Aww, So sweet...
Beautifully penned with a great narrative & warmest sentiment throughout...
Felt it, lived it, loved it!!!
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Good luck in the contest you entered.
I love this, it's so sweet, and something I would say to anyone I loved.
Keep it up!
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This is great dear poet, you did an grand job with this. Best of luck to you in this contest.
Riftkin
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oh this is beautiful. very well written and heartfelt.
Good luck in the contest.
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Great write! "heart", in the title, however is misspelled, and had me confused for a minute. good luck in the contest!!!!
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ummm... fix the title XD but nice poem.
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Great write, I wish you luck on your contest. Open hearted and full giving of self, a wonderful love poem
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amazing
Wow, brilliant!
This describes so deep into someone heartbreak and love towards another. I feel as if I can hear the words being spoken to me.
Beautiful job
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Astounding Poem!
You did a marvelous job with this brilliant masterpiece the rhyme and flow of it was just unstoppable and that is awesome. You did a great job with this. God bless you always my poetic friend in everything you do and write and best wishes to you in the contest.
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